Wednesday, April 6, 2011

My favourite athlete

my favourite athlete is Mirkko Gozolli (dancer) he has been world champion very very very much time. He is really good, hes italian and he has cool hairstyle.He has alot of sponsors from evrywhere nt: from England,from Japan,from Italia, from evrywhere from asia and europe.He has nice character and he makes good jokes.

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  1. Hi Werner,

    It has been very interesting to get to know about Mirkko Gozolli!

    Here are also some learning points from your text:

    1. In the sentence '..world champion very very very much time'. 'mitmeid kordi' in English should be 'many times'.

    2. he is (for short: he's) - tema on
    It should be 'He's Italian' OR 'He is Italian'.

    3. 'palju' - a lot of
    'A' ja 'lot' are two separate words

    4. Check the spelling of this word: 'evrywhere'. Can you find a little mistake in it?

    5. 'Näiteks' or 'nt' in English is 'eg'. It is read 'for example' and it comes from Latin words 'exempli gratia' - 'for the sake of example'.

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